Tuesday, August 25, 2009

Storybuilders: Edition 6 (and Ramon Escalderon)

This week's first line:

Alana jumped out of the car and ran toward the ocean. As soon as she got to the beach, she kicked off her shoes and headed for...

The Rules:

1. Each person can only add two sentences.
2. You may not post two consecutive entries (otherwise it wouldn't be wiki-ish), but you may come back and add on after someone else has added their entry.
3. Let's try to keep it PG.
4. You can designate new paragraphs and time pauses if you want to.
5. HAVE FUN!


Ramon Escalderon

"Jorge, what do you think you're doing? That car is just..."

"Calmate, Luis, esta bien. With this car, I know what I'm getting. I know the history. And mi papa didn't make me shell out a fortune, either."

Just then, Luis and Jorge turned to see a sleek cadi drive slowy by, the car was so low the exaust would have dragged on the floor if they had not been turned up and come out of the rear wheel arches. For a moment the suns reflection on the crome blinded Luis and Jorge, but as their eyes cleared they realized the car was speaking?

"Hello, I am Ramon Escalderon, a Columbian car who would be so flattered if you would go for a ride in my automobile. Look how sleek, shiny and sexy I am, and I smell like the sea-VROOM, VROOM VROOM!"

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